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Saturday, October 11, 2014
Mr. Bun - the peer reviewer
You greatly improved your work with the shredder. I'll make it even better now, round it of a bit. It's so good, I even won't touch your hay.
"Now, Professor, before I'm accused of saying 'the dog ate my homework,' I just want to let you know that I gave my paper to the bunny because he *promised* to provide fair, constructive criticism. The good news is that he found it very tasty indeed, and he has demanded, well, rather, encouraged me to write an even better one." -Jen (Kohl's mom)
As usual, it was unnecessarily verbose. It's not surprising that big, heavy, clumsy lumbering hoomins produce reports that match their nature.
As I am feeling generous today, I have decided to take in your report, digest it, and return to you a more succinct, concentrated form. You may expect it to arrive in an hour or two. Look for a compact dark brown spheroid.
Next time, try to apply the lessons I'm teaching you now about acceptable, brief, succinct content.
And in case there is any lingering doubt about my opinion of your drafted report: I Disapprove! "
4 comments:
Your supervisions is greatly needed Mr Bun,as we humans always need to strive to be better!xx Rachel
I dunno here. That review sounds almost too good to be true. Has Mr. Bunn got something up his -er - ear here?
"Now, Professor, before I'm accused of saying 'the dog ate my homework,' I just want to let you know that I gave my paper to the bunny because he *promised* to provide fair, constructive criticism. The good news is that he found it very tasty indeed, and he has demanded, well, rather, encouraged me to write an even better one."
-Jen (Kohl's mom)
"I have read and digested your report, hoomin.
As usual, it was unnecessarily verbose. It's not surprising that big, heavy, clumsy lumbering hoomins produce reports that match their nature.
As I am feeling generous today, I have decided to take in your report, digest it, and return to you a more succinct, concentrated form. You may expect it to arrive in an hour or two. Look for a compact dark brown spheroid.
Next time, try to apply the lessons I'm teaching you now about acceptable, brief, succinct content.
And in case there is any lingering doubt about my opinion of your drafted report:
I Disapprove! "
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